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I listened to your track April Showers. Very cute track, I liked it and don't really have much to critique. Only thing I might add is that maybe the guitar mixing could be a bit better and more spacious but take that as you will. On the track All this is Over you could be a bit more confident on the mic :)
Nice melodies and mix sounds fine to me as well. Sounds like the music I wouldn't mind heaing in a vlog haha. Don't have much to critique, it sounds like you know what you are doing.

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make it slower and more distorted please. thanks. Stop using so much blue, we get it. Pretty voice.

soundcloud.com/underwatter-man/sets/valal-terminal-man
>Synthpop
>New wave
>Bedroom pop
>Post-punk

My track :)

This is really good but please sing on it earlier, it’s missing something. Do something dumb, ok?

ascoiris.bandcamp.com/releases
soundcloud.com/ascoiris/sets/the-guardians-were-never-on-our-side
>post hardcore
>concept ep
>early underoath / treebeard inspired

Loved the mood and hihats
Really nice, it definitely needs some vocals

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NEW ALBUM (36 HOURS LONG)
jmarion.bandcamp.com/album/impressions
RATE IT YOURSELF
rateyourmusic.com/release/album/jackson-marion/impressions/
INTERVIEW
tastune.com/interview-jackon-marion/
ALBUM REVIEW
dekomodo.com/areviews/zt69k3qt0uh94jpumrycyark4cai8g
MY WEBSITE
jmarionart.wordpress.com/

IMPRESSIONS FULL TRACKLIST
>enigma
1. I 01:00:46
2. II 01:02:16
3. III 01:02:57
>affinity
4. I 01:03:07
5. II 01:03:07
6. III 01:07:50
7. IV 01:09:00
>divinity
8. I 01:02:24
9. II 01:02:36
10. III 01:01:03
>abstraction
11. I 01:01:00
12. II 01:01:07
13. III 01:01:40
14. IV 01:01:14
15. V 01:01:47
16. VI 01:01:13
>disillusion
17. I 01:01:20
18. II 01:04:28
>edification
19. I 01:03:12
20. II 01:03:24
21. III 01:03:00
22. IV 01:04:05
>renaissance
23. I 01:01:25
24. II 01:02:13
25. III 01:00:14
26. IV 01:00:08
27. V 01:00:19
>enlightenment
28. I 01:01:25
29. II 01:03:24
30. III 01:03:48
31. IV 01:04:11
32. V 01:01:25
33. VI 01:04:11
34. VII 01:03:00
35. VIII 01:00:05

36 HOURS LONG / 2,188 MINUTES

>post-avant
>number station recordings
>impressionism
>atonal drone
>frequency theory

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new to the site? you should quote who you are talking to. its unclear who you are providing feedback for

bump

Interesting... I don't usually like noise tracks but this isn't bad.

youtu.be/yllwzkcGCdk

>electronic

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music.apple.com/us/album/nocturne-single/1525859166
I really like the bassline, apart from that I don't know how to give more feedback, I like the it overall.

City Lights is lovely. Very atmospheric, old trance vibes. Great track.

listening to The Okayest Feeling. Beautiful. I want to make something like this next. What did you use to record this?

very nice vibes. wasnt expecting this from the artwork lol. Sounds like something that should be on the soundtrack of Drive. lol nicely done.

Me:

mitchellgonzalez.bandcamp.com/track/a-very-very-merry-christmas

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youtube.com/watch?v=6LXzvcshmQA&ab_channel=MitchellGonzalez

love your art, man

soundcloud.com/prettyoverpowered/one-of-your-lovers

>alternative

New song in a week!

RECS:

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soundcloud.com/chasame
>Glitch
Cheesy lyrics, but the voice is nice. There's some processing on it, right?
Love "The Gatekeeper" sudden intro. Overall well done, though not too memorable
Love this style where you can't tell what the hell the singer is saying. Unlike most songs in this genre, yours actually has a nice progression and dynamic instead of being a compressed wall of echoing guitars and vocals. Saved

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a few overdubs and some added harmonics. Yeah, Christmas music is cheesy lol

a few layers of vocals, rather

soundcloud.com/eoinlyness/sets/isolation-tapes

eoinlyness.bandcamp.com/album/isolation-tapes

>ambient
>lofi
>drone
>noise

eoinlyness.com

rateyourmusic.com/artist/eoin-lyness

Rec:

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soundcloud.com/cacti-buble/personally-the-chicken-gone-get-you

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>post-punk trash
Our latest video collage containing footage from Combat Shock. Post-punk/no wave
youtube.com/watch?v=U40M6iv125I

And here are couple others we made
youtube.com/watch?v=JT8tFk4kkys
youtube.com/watch?v=kvpg23QI_Pw

BC: breadonbread.bandcamp.com/

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