How's Your Webcomic? #651

Is your webcomic a webcomic, or is it more of a sandwich or like a guitar?

>/hyw/ CONTACT SHEET - add your webcomic site, contact information, etc
docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit

> DRAWING PRACTICE and TUTORIALS
ctrlpaint.com
drawabox.com/
line-of-action.com/
quickposes.com/en

> STOCK IMAGES and REFERENCE
People: deviantart.com/senshistock/gallery/
Scenery: shutterstock.com/
Character Design: pinterest.com/characterdesigh/

> FONTS
Blambot: blambot.com/
Create your own: calligraphr.com/en/

> WEBSITE
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: tumblr.com/theme/39018
Dos and Don'ts for starting a site: pastebin.com/raw/kNR2W5mV (embed)
Promoting your comic: miss-melee.tumblr.com/post/143483233951/a-guide-to-zero-cost-webcomic-promotion

> ART and WRITING RESOURCES
makingcomics.com/
mediafire.com/folder/9pf1nwwa92lbp/Comics_for_making_Comics
archive.org/details/RobertMcKeeStorypdf/
courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
.../invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
.../invisible_ink_part_3.pdf
pastebin.com/BSVaT7uQ
How Creativity Works: youtube.com/watch?v=Pb5oIIPO62g

> Brush Packs
CSP: mega.nz/#F!5xlV2IzJ!bg8BZB-oYaVrmD31S3fJHw

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webtoons.com/en/challenge/omnifighters/introduction/viewer?title_no=189548&episode_no=1
tapas.io/episode/1735377
zamcomics.cfw.me/
m.tapas.io/series/Zam-comics
tapas.io/episode/1272284
newgrounds.com/art/view/roadrunners13/cherry-ch-1-pg-17
tapas.io/series/Tad-Danger-Substitute-Ranger
tapas.io/episode/1736570
tapas.io/episode/1694173
comicadia.com/presents/comic/cosmo-lass/cosmo-lass-pg-2/
youtu.be/jXDT-MuJWfw
youtu.be/XA3KBmt-ZH8
youtu.be/CLc7kyswOCw
youtu.be/oJifGQbcdAI
youtu.be/YsQWj3KtrYE
webtoons.com/en/challenge/clinic-of-horrors/ep-34-many-years-ago/viewer?title_no=274661&episode_no=36
strawpoll.me/19883791/r
monster-lands.com/
obrazkowo.pl/main/media/c818cfc279cfe5b3d49db999b1be69ce/why-have-you-summoned-me
youtu.be/bqOOlSWWIUo
aidn.jp/wowa/45705898
aidn.jp/wowa/02592041
newgrounds.com/art/view/roadrunners13/cherry-ch-1-pg-18
twitter.com/NSFWRedditGif

tapas.io/episode/1735253 new update for me comic

>Is your webcomic a webcomic, or is it more of a sandwich or like a guitar?
Yeah, I guess.

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Let it be the last.

Hmmm... What are your credentials, bro?

>Especially if you're not sure how to handle the "touchy" subjects.
Maybe it's bravado on my part but I feel I can handle those as long as I make the research and treat every participant in any situation as a full character even if they only have a small part; though that makes me really slow.

>Now, 80's can be tricky. But I think sentai and such don't usually benefit from "human drama" so just go for it.
What do you mean with human drama?

>don't you have a black zord??
Yes but my black ranger is irish.

sorry for reposting i need the replies

webtoons.com/en/challenge/omnifighters/introduction/viewer?title_no=189548&episode_no=1

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tapas.io/episode/1735377

New page. Currently working on the next page.

let it all out.

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A new quest begins on My Quest

zamcomics.cfw.me/
m.tapas.io/series/Zam-comics

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I love their little hats
Already left you a typo correction on the site

Read my comic or die trying:
tapas.io/episode/1272284

As another thread question, do you have a favorite "ship dynamic"?. Not as in boats, as couples.
I love mentor x student.

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Also as usual reposting this last update. If you find out the big mistake I made you get one uncool drawing from me.

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Mistake can be in any of these 3 pages btw. I'll fix it tomorrow. Today is rest day.

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Also this is the last hyw thread ever.

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don't YOU start with that shit now. You are too good and too argentinian to shitpost.

This page isn't named 8c.png

no, it's a continuity thing

implying

newgrounds.com/art/view/roadrunners13/cherry-ch-1-pg-17

It’s the shirt, isn’t it? He was wearing a tank top in the previous pages.

Favorite ship dynamic? Gosh, I don’t know. Something like one of these.

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I killed it after 3 issues and it will never come back.
All of my 37 readers must be horribly distressed haha.

I want 37 readers.

No, user, you ostensibly want more than that.

Shilly Dilly y'all

tapas.io/series/Tad-Danger-Substitute-Ranger

New kaiju profile is up. It's Leif the space vikings. Kinda sorta a repost, but this one is focused the vikings themselves, rather than their armor in the CyKEA catalogue.

tapas.io/episode/1736570

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Dumping some pages ive been working.

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I like airships. Blimps are underrated as hell.

>a weg and drak is fine too

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Reposting last Tom N Artie update from earlier this week

tapas.io/episode/1694173

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And last Cosmo Lass page:

comicadia.com/presents/comic/cosmo-lass/cosmo-lass-pg-2/

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>well get me some too
I'm not going to waste image space here with a laughing reaction image but you're a fucking funny dude you know that

definetely a sandwich!

nearly done with the layouts for the next update!

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Yes, you win, you can get any drawing.

There are so many wonderful types of couples... childhood friends, thirsty girl and cool guy, confident babe and dork, twins...

>spears guy blocked all his followers from /hyw/ but didn't block this guy

I-Is this guy the true Spears Guy?

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Just checked, I aint blocked.

So i've been told.
Glad you like it.

I got blocked too. Wonder what is up with that.
What if its a meta commentary on swords blocking everyone, and this was the natural end result of the parody?

Did Swords block you? I'm not blocked.

Can the brushes be used for commercial use?

no idea! this has been pasted hundreds of times, the original person who put the mega together is probably dead.

Just started reading your comic yesterday and its some great stuff. Normally I wouldn't read something with this kind of art style but I love your character and mech designs and your sense of humor is top notch.

Smacky is a fantastic example of why you shouldn't let one little weakness stop you from flexing your strengths. And he's improved the art a lot too!

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Admittedly, my art is my biggest weakness, but its slowly getting better. I'm a writer first. I started drawing last year.

Yeah I'm really happy I discovered his comic. Definately going to stick with it and look forward to future updates. Smacky has inspired me to try harder on my own work, so hopefully I'll be able to post something in the future soon.

Spears guy and Swords user are the same person. Spears was made to generate more publicity for swords.

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Post gay characters. Show some representation.

Gay characters are the majority of webcomic characters.

I want to write a story but judging by the threads here, I'm afraid I'll be torn apart because I dared attack a particular group that simultaneously "doesnt exist" yet I'll be branded the scarlet letter if I did. It's easy to say "ignore them" but everytime, I see authours buckle down under pressure by them.

Fuck what others think, write what you want user

No?

I'd post my dashingly handsome sixth ranger guy but I can't draw. :(

Chloe is lesbian
She likes girls

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Cringe

This. having your brain hijacked by DEFYING the wackos is as fruitless as pleasing them.

gays dont exist in my comics universe

What about just reacting to them like a normal person that hasn't done anything bad would?
If someone started harassing me in the street because, idunno, I made a tranny villain I would tell them to fuck off.

That kind of people don't actually care about minorities, they only care about accruing power and picking fights with strangers.

Chloe felt extremely sad and started crying user

I have bi.

wow these threads are nothing with out bones

t. bones

She took a small kinfe and started cutting herself
Little pieces of skin fell off forming a cut
She kept cutting on that same already cut part of her arm

bump

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>10 year old
>sexually precocious
>goes on Zig Forums
>is a drummer
was she sexually abused as a child?

It's me, the Chloeposter
Yes

added to the lore

I don't think so. Girls who were sexually abused (especially when they were little) are a emotional mess. They usually need a looong therapy to get out of it.

What's the lore so far?

Is hadley sexually abused too, you think?

Admiral pizza Dream Team fighters (Working title) Is a game coming out for PS4. starring your favorite pizza powered superhero! The evil Coronachan has infected all of time and space, but "heroes" powered by "hope" and "Dreams" always rise to stop her. Dreams...where do they come from? Where do they go? These things she wants to destroy, forever. The Admiral can't do it alone. Hes putting together a team of your favorite /hywc/ Characters to TAKE HER DOWN. You can play as Admiral pizza, Nightmoose, Vampire hunter J, Azu, Tadd Danger, gasparro, W.E.G., Aideen the mean, and Amish the mechanism. There will be episodic story mode and a 4 player versus mode. And yes, there WILL be pizza.

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Everyone is here!

Even some people that don't post here anymore

>make a cool magic system in my story based off the latin Haruspex
>build on it and works pretty damn well at least in my shitter opinion
>suddently remember that i dont know etruscan and whoever practices that has to
>everything falls apart from there
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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needs some west tree heroes in the mix

Not quite. Not picured, the oni spears and swordfox clans. Coronachan got word the Admiral is getting a team together. She is too..she infected stardust the space wizard, Pays SharkTie 100$ Dollars for every universe he personally destroyed. Ellie gets a mecha suit out of the deal. Drakk is highly contagious and is wandering universe to universe infecting everything.

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No, but I think Chloe told her about everything at one point and now Hadley puts up with her bullshit out of pity. That said, they should be like 16yo for these comics to make sense

Not taking anymore characters at the moment, it so much fun to bring them to life! I have enough "Actors" at the moment. Id like to actually write down a plot. I have a rough outline in my head. Azu at some point eats a baby and powers up. They travel through time ala chrono trigger. Toss an idea and i might put it in. Right now Learning how to do gameplay stuff like cutscenes, powerups, individual lives..menus.

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Anyone doing webtoon's short story contest?

I believe G was trying to.

Gameplay footage:

Introduction to Coronachan
youtu.be/jXDT-MuJWfw

Admiral pizza and Tadd Danger fight a pissed off space wizard.
youtu.be/XA3KBmt-ZH8

Amish, Azu, Admiral pizza fight the gruelmaster.
youtu.be/CLc7kyswOCw

The oni spears clan and swordfoxes try to Assassinate the Admiral.
youtu.be/oJifGQbcdAI

4 player battle at the Arcade.
youtu.be/YsQWj3KtrYE

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Nice webcomic faggot

wait how does being a drummer fit into that?

first time drawing something in months. i know its really bad, but while making this i felt inspired to make a yuri femdom sci fi webcomic one day. Going to try to significantly improve my fundies if i actually go through with making a web comic.
i really like this one:
webtoons.com/en/challenge/clinic-of-horrors/ep-34-many-years-ago/viewer?title_no=274661&episode_no=36

But does anyone know what website i would release degenerate hentai comic? lol

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Drummers generally are psychotic/autistic/mentally fucked up in some other way, or at least that's what I learnt from going on Zig Forums
case in point:

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Rau?

t. Azu

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I've always thought If I play any istrument it would be drums. Now I know why.

Stop. Rau is in the no bully list.

post the list

RAU is winning currently!
strawpoll.me/19883791/r
Remember to vote if you havent.

Still my favorite yet-not-here character for some reason.

Yeah I guess she counts, although I was thinking of her brother.

Azu wouldn't judge hey.
Saved

Nega Cole
Rau
Gurk
Weg

Actually I don't think Rau belongs with all those saints.

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Since I got a horned sillhouette model put together, went back and did renders for the first page.

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More characters have been added to the list.

Here's a new Monster Lands page: monster-lands.com/

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Love that you are doing transformer characters now. Anything else you might have planned in the future? Like Kamen rider or metal heroes referances? Shogun warriors could be fun to check out as well for ideas if you like anime super robots.

Trannies? Libtards? Radical muslim terrorists? Illegal aliens? Which group are you talking about?

They care about dopamine hits and using their political ideology to justify their bullying, censorship and abuse.

I liked the idea of her being a carpet muncher who learns to love the dick, very redpilled plot there.

so uuuh i started drawing again

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Planned so far
A fusion of Gao Gai Gar/ Big O
A voltron parody
And a minor Gurren Lagann parody.
I had a women rider parody, but had to cut for time.
My plan is to actually reuse a lot of the established teams and groups. Everyone gets an encore.

*Kamen Rider
Fucking auto correct.

Woman rider is something entirely different.

Fine. Those are on the no bulli list.

Oh that already sounds neat. Going to be fun to see how you pay tribute to all those shows.

Who? Don't say Ellie.

It's ultimately JK Rowling levels of irrelevant.

Niiiice. Always remember to post link once you start uploading.

don't worry bout that. I just need to finish setting up the site heh

>Who? Don't say Ellie.
Don't bully Ellie.

It's Walpurgisnacht, who is the real witch in your comic?

Bullying is wrong. Nobody deserves to be bullied. Not even Anti pineapple pizza people.

Bamp

Boop

AMAZING!

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why have you summoned me: obrazkowo.pl/main/media/c818cfc279cfe5b3d49db999b1be69ce/why-have-you-summoned-me

I would argue that if pieces are coming out, it's no longer a cut. that's a gash. The two sides of a cut are still touching.
You madman.

nothing like a succubus's facade dropping, i've always been a fan of that.

now I'm just thinking of different puns
>Ramen Rider
>Salmon Rider
>Hamantashen (kamen riders are usually bug-themed and at least one is a mantis, so..)

There's hella witches in my comic, it's fun! They wear cute hats and do magic.
Where's Megawacky Max lately anyway?

here have some ms paint animated fan art of the pizza man!

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heres that (you) you wanted so bad user

>tossing good food into trash
you deserve to die

Oh my god i love it!! Thank you!

It's deserved.

Either Tamamo or Douma count.

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>It's deserved.
Cease. All kids are on the no bully list.

I had a whole character drawn up already.
The idea was that he was going to be Tad's childhood hero, and Tad was going to try and pull him out of retirement.
The issue was that it had nothing to do with the central gimmick of the story, ie. combination.
I felt that the manipod had to be core to the story, otherwise the premise would be lost.
There was actually many more parodies planned where Tad would just fill in as a pilot of other characters non-combining mechas.
Some examples
>Tad fills in on a Darling and the Franx parody. He straps handle bars on his ass and fills in for the girl with a very uncomfortable dude. One of the gags was tad shoving a cup holder in his ass crack for the dudes drink.
>Big O parody, where the mecha looked like Notorious B.I.G. and one of the gags was the mecha telling tad "Cast in the name of god... you aight"
>Evangelion parody, where Tads job was just to convince the Shinji knockoff to get in the robot, before discovering that the Gendo knockoff turned his mom into the mecha as part of a sexual kink and thoroughly freaking everyone out.

All these, and the Kamen Rider parody, had to be stripped out to streamline the story and make combination the core theme of the story.

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You like Eva and Darling in the Franx? Wtf I hate you now.
Just kiddin.

that's a real writer for ya.
I forgot I've seen this guy already.

honestly i hated Darling in the Franx. Eva i am indifferent to. Neither are hotblooded enough for my taste. I could write a book on every reason i hated Darling.
Though that wouldnt stop me from making fun of them in comic form.

Ok, I'm not sure if I should post this in here but... I made another update of my comic (but on youtube, as a video)
What I'm trying to say is: What do you think about? youtu.be/bqOOlSWWIUo

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This is a fine place for that kind of video, it's just a comic.
The lack of expressions makes this pretty bland, it's not for me.

Yeah I understand. I don't know much about animation so at least I tried to do cute and "detailed" pics.

Rise from your gravy

New Chloe

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This is giving me deja vu.

mentally ill girls don't get desks

did you copy this

It's from a comic I saw on Zig Forums some time ago. I didn't mean it as a copy, just a homage.

I like pizza but i love you

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I know which one you're talking about. It's the one where the puppy girls get bullied into oblivion and at the end she begs the readers to donate money to the artist to make her feel better.

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>at the end she begs the readers to donate money to the artist to make her feel better.

I did not know that part, bruh

Show your bullshit
aidn.jp/wowa/45705898

Will check it out soon.

aidn.jp/wowa/02592041

wtf am I looking at

fun

Characters daydreaming of their friends.

Poor butler bot
He made those drinks with so much love

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I like your game :)

Not a game, making an animated project.
It's sequential art still so I guess it counts...?

Happy Walpurgisnacht hyw! Burn bonfires to keep witches, coronachan and evil spirits away. This and some new pages are what I've been working on. Hopefully a new update is coming soon.

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It's good, m8, don't worry

I can't justify working on these two pages any longer than I have. I'll call them successes. Only, I still have a problem of my structures often looking like doll houses.

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114638743
>representation

for fuck sake, you Borg Queens

Don't dollhouses do their best to look like normal houses?

...

Im a G1 fanboy, but i was still able to work in a little bit of Beast Wars.

That Aideen is looking gorgeous as ever my man.
>Bonfires to keep witches away
Why would i want to ward off some spooky goth chicks? I do that well enough on my own anyway.

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Nothing like a good case of mistaken identity and contrived resemblance. I love it.
also totally in-character for transformers to not have any special senses that would tell you like the energy signature of the fellow robot you're looking at or anything like that, and when you want to access a computer you have to ... pop one out of your body and look at it with your eyes and shit. That's consistent with how they work. The whole disguise thing wouldn't last long otherwise.

LIVE DAMN YOU! LIVE!

My webcomic is definately more like a sandwich than a webcomic.

Nice Azu! I dig the slight asymetry to her arm bands.

As for pet relationships, strong guy that's done things he's not proud of and shy girl he wants to protect. Rocky and Adrian basically.

>Boop beep be doop
You are a treasure Smacky.

Huh. I got blocked by Swords but not Spears.

Don't be so dramatic. If the Bernie Bro hangout that is tapas can tolerate me they can tolerate you.

im drawin

>Nice Azu! I dig the slight asymetry to her arm bands.
that's totally not a mistake

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draw more

>sensual Azu licking

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NOT if Rau can stop her

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Some art of Bubonic from years ago, he was originally apart of a different cape project. I just plucked him out of the pile of artwork I had and propped him into the Cosmo Lass setting.

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Delet now.

I dont remember hearing about this one before. Is it a superhero story? Looks fun.

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Me and some writer friends of mine write superhero stuff in our downtime from other projects. We made a character named Cosmo Lass for the setting, kinda based her off an earlier Carol Danvers. Mostly in the aspect that she has immense powers but no one seems to give a damn about whatever she does. She's mostly in the superheroics for clout and fame but has a rough time getting it.

In all honesty I wrote short scripts for her to get myself out of writing flunks in the past few months. People actually enjoyed them so I got a new team together (artist, inker, colorist and letterer) and started adapting the stuff I wrote.

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I love it!

You want to use classical magic?

Here friend. Take this:

ftp://neuroky.me/Hyperborean%20Knowledge/Paganism/Hellenism/Daniel%20Ogden%20-%20Magic,%20Witchcraft%20and%20Ghosts%20in%20the%20Greek%20and%20Roman%20Worlds.pdf

It's pic related and the best source on classical magic I've ever read. It's got a lot of primary source documentation. I promise you that you won't regret looking at it.

>3-5 episodes with at least 30 panels per episode
I'm afraid that's a no for me.

God bless you Admiral.

I had to vote for good oni. Rau is too pure.

>The no bully list

Heyyyyyy, I noticed Percy wasn't on the list!
Not that I mind one bit...

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I cannot put her there with a straight face after the shit I've drawn.

Awww hell yeah, love the group shot.

Looks fun, I'll be checking it out. I like the idea of a superhero who is there for clout.

May want to keep an eye out for my friend's webcomic 'Red Light Rumble' which is gonna take place in the same city but follow a more serious hero named Rushdown.

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>GaoGaiGar plus Big O
So he used power tools but with a steampunk flavor?

>Eva parody
DO IT

And make not-NERV's psychologist a sad clown.

Who else but Fantomah?

NICE!

>But you were literally an object
Ha!

Neat! So she's sort of like a Booster Gold type character? How is Comicadia anyhow? What all do you have to do to get on it?

You are free to draw Azu bullying any of my characters anytime. Though if Percy wins the contest thing you might be drawing Azu being bullied instead.

I suppose Booster Gold is a good comparison too.

Comicadia is pretty nice and I just got in from being friendly with people in there for a while.

The idea I'm going with is that the mecha is distinctly Gao Gai Gar, while the pilot has the debonair batman flair of Big O. She is the one who has a mecha made out of like 10 parts and pilots it solo. She constantly coughs up blood due to the effects of the engines.

I had some great gags for the Eva parody. Including RMILFs, and masturbation jokes, etc. However it just wasn't sound with the narrative. A lot of the parodies just kinda stuck out like a sore thumb, and they were too short. I had always intended to do parodies, some, like Warhammer, transformers, Gao H
Gai Gar, and Voltron took a life of their own and became full narratives. The others, never got past a few jokes. The Gurren Lagaan parody is teetering on that now. Its very short and would be filler, I could cut it wothout fear. Only reason I hesitate is because the Mecha design I have is badass and the jokes are funny. The combination aspect also makes it relevant to the story.
I think part of the distinct humor I want to go for is this tight enmeshed world where everything is important and called back numerous times, until the whole thing becomes this meta joke that constantly flows into itself. So if a concept doesnt mesh into that, it gets cut.

I've been doing a quarantine marathon of Venture Bros. Its everything I want to be as a writer.

You really are a great writer. Of course it's not like a good idea needs to be cut entirely just because it can't support a chapter on its shoulders, it's allowed to be a smaller part, at least to begin with. Venture Bros does that all the time.

Any is fine for me, I have some ideas for when a result comes.

Well, I absolutely love that design.

>I think part of the distinct humor I want to go for is this tight enmeshed world where everything is important and called back numerous times, until the whole thing becomes this meta joke that constantly flows into itself. So if a concept doesnt mesh into that, it gets cut.

You got this man.

>I have some ideas for when a result comes
Oh?
Can you share?

Booster Gold does have a huge ego and is scatter brained, but he actually does a good enough job with his powers where even Batman praises him for his work. A better comparison with the clout and fame angle would be Darkwing Duck.

A 5 drawing thing, 2 lewd 4 Zig Forums.
But I might not actually go with it, so I'll wait till it ends.

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>you will never get porn of your OC
Why even live?

Just ask him for it

>picking her up by the crotch of her singlet
ho yeah

You have some nice ideas

>can get porn of your OC but will always be them being banged by Azu

Who are your OCs?

I like it.

Swords blocked Spears AND Spears followers? That's pathetic.

Yeah he blocked me. On tapas and twitter.

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Why THE FUCK is she a furry?

You're a bro after all, good to know. Too bad I could count good/looking like they would be good post-2000 mecha series on the fingers of my one hand.

I think i've finally nailed down the shape of this character

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I want to nail her down

Look at those arms, she'd do it first.

Mainly Libtards. Transexuals aren't bad as a whole except for the really toxic ones who get away with everything by flaunting their victim status, Radical muslim terrorists are old hat these days to villify and illegal immigrants as a whole aren't really evil, as most of them are glorified exploited slaves.

But why Libtards, or SJWs? Because they're kind of the reason why all of the above have issues, because they are enablers of the most toxic aspects of them.

It feels difficult to even make an allegory about them because if I do it too subtly, it won't make sense, but if I make it too obvious, then I'm painting a target on myself. The current idea is that they currently run a superhero organisation but they ran it into the ground as they spend more time making citizens miserable for tiny little things than actually fight villains. Then my hero gets recognition for doing the most minimal, obvious thing that heroes do (fight bad guys), which paints said hero as "enemy number one" by said hero team because said hero makes them look bad.

Even better.

Just do it man. If you have an idea for a project you want to make, don't let yourself get dragged down by fears of the current social/political climate, you honestly really do not want to cater to these people anyway. It's always the same shit where people try way too hard to pander to these audiences that you're so afraid of, then they slip up once and get yelled at by 150k people and constantly start having to formally apologize for every misstep, effectively becoming their bitch for eternity. You give these people a finger, they take your whole body and your first born son.

The rider idea could still work even with the whole combination mecha theme going on. Some of the super hero taisen movies feature rider tech combining with the sentai mechs. Like the Gobuster mech used some of Kamen rider Fourze's switch weapons to power up in the movie. But yeah it would have to fit within the story somehow for it to work I guess.

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Why the fuck you need to tackle these issues altogether in a fucking superhero comic? It won't benefit your work and even drive away some people out of it. I'm a part of the "not the most privileged group" I guess and it's a fucking cringe for me to see [character of my group] having to fight for their rights like a caged animal most of the time. I want it to be fucking obvious that [my group] equall to everyone else and I want [my group] to be punished accordingly for if they commit crimes and such.
I agree about libtards and swjs because they're clowns that bring hatred by overprotection and idealistic projections of the [groups]. That being said transexualism and religious fanatism is indefendable, and shouldn't be allowed to be legal. Also, yeah, illegals aren't really "evil" because thinking that someone is evil is really just a subjective feeling. The problem about them is that they come from backgrounds of extreme poverty and hostility and also with extremely backward morals.
Hiding crimes, and treating [some group] as holy cows will only make them more hated and more prone to be lynched.

Why the fuck would anyone block a person on Tapas? Don't they want your ad money?

>It won't benefit your work and even drive away some people out of it. I'm a part of the "not the most privileged group" I guess and it's a fucking cringe for me to see [character of my group] having to fight for their rights like a caged animal most of the time. I want it to be fucking obvious that [my group] equall to everyone else and I want [my group] to be punished accordingly for if they commit crimes and such.

That's because you sound like a normal person who just wants a good story.

Most of the Social crusaders in the mainstream are, ironically, white women and men of soi who feel they need to be offended on the behalf of every minority race, sexuality, or religion. Most of the of the people who complain about this shit are not even the people being affected, which ironically doesn't deliver the message they want and just comes off as patronizing.

I don't get the thread question at all this time...

Doing a bit more work a few chapters ahead. Although the idea hasn't really firm up yet, I have a basic outline in my head. I am jumping around a lot which really isn't ideal...

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You can’t trick me user

That's the nagging part of my brain that said "don't do it". Aside from the "fear" part of me saying "you'll cause an unnecessary shit storm", there's another part that says "are you sure this is a good idea even if they weren't coming after you?" The nagging part that told me that I didn't like that shit when SJWs do that to everyone. I guess part of me was so annoyed by them that I wanted to annoy them back.

Although in my case, I'm trying to break it down to the basics of why they are hated, rather than just go "these are SJWs, fuck them". That way, it's not about their beliefs, but their behavior. I chose "superheroes" because most of these types think their heroes in their own little worlds.

Basically, you're right about not wanting the allegory to be too on the nose as it's annoying to read that shit.

Take it from a guy on your side of the political spectrum. You have to be smart about how you incorporate politics otherwise you're no better than the other side. Take my stuff for instance. The presence of superhumans led to Russia staying with the Axis and prevented the Spanish Civil War. The ungovernable individualism represented by wild talents drove the Axis closer together. Having Russia on the side of the bad guys says a lot. It's backstory, but it says a lot.

Hey Ardi, can you post the reference for adult Azu again?

The most important thing is to not be a pussy. If you like your story, fight for it. I'm interested in hearing more about it. So it's like if the Justice League decided to do social engineering instead of superheroics? Why exactly would they do that? Even the most hardcore Bernie Bro is probably going to want Superman to beat up criminals before he lectures about privledges.

newgrounds.com/art/view/roadrunners13/cherry-ch-1-pg-18

The idea was that the old guard's not there anymore. They were either retired, KIA or banished/driven out. The ones in charge are narcissistic shitters (who may or may not be the ones who usurped the old guard through underhanded means, or picked up the slack from the power vacuum) They squander the good will of the old team by taking their titles but do nothing with them except mistreat the populace, while only occasionally fighting villains who are on the same level as "The Prankster" (while doing nothing about the actually strong villains)

Basically imagine a group that managed kicked out Superman, Batman etc, dress up as them and run the place to the ground.

Feel free to use regular Azu though, this design was just for fun.

Nice, love those Rococo poses.

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One thing smacky has made me realize is when drawing what you love and making chracters and story, Dont be ashamed of your inspirations. Know what you love, and why you love it. And you can tap into that same energy. When i was 14 i created an animated cartoon called zan and eddie. I was young and i loved Saturday morning cartoons and the robots in megaman, a big inspiration was cowboy bebop but i didn't want to admit it. Anime was all over the place and i started to hate it cuz im a kid and dumb. Last year i re-watched cowboy bebop and fell in love with it all over again..the spaceships, music, style..storytelling. this is what teenage me wanted my series to be. I spent more energy trying to make it "my own thing" then just admitting my inspirations. I love the scrooge mcduck comics, I love Batman and the comics (and i miss adam west ), so i created Nightmoose. I loved the 1986 transformers movie, and i wanted to tap into that same energy. I love time skips, i love the late 70's. So i made Admiral pizza issue 3. I love metal gear soild. And i am deeply concerned about plastic in our oceans. I like giant turtles, frogs, and squids. So i made Admiral pizza issue 4. Venture brothers was always a huge inspiration, the same guys working on that worked on the tick. That show inspired me in my youth. I love star wars. And have been fascinated with the Civil war. My next story will be the Admirals origin story mixed with starwars but in the american civil war. Know what you love!! Write it down! Let it show through your work!!

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Bipboop with sketch of next page done.

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how many hours does it take you to complete a page?

Dunno, never counted it and it varies.
However I did realize my limit is pulling 3-4 pages a week.

Same, some pages take longer then others. It used to take me 8 hours to do a page, but i stopped handwriting all the text bubbles and made my own font, cuts down on time alot. I can on average do a page in 6 hours. For my next story i might experiment with techniques and new stylings to save time.