Fix season two
Fix season two
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more episodes, add third season, dont fuck up, simple as
Give Mabel a gun
More Ford and Dipper. Have Mabel either be less of a retard/asshole or have her get punished for being one.
kill the bitch
>tfw no episode of mabel becoming a /k/omando
No we can't do that how else is she going to get raped
end the show at not what he seems
if not then make stanford the main villain, bill was clearly a last minute choice for it
I thought the last season was pretty great, fellow 4channel Zig Forumsmprades! But here is what I would do to make it better in retrospect!
>more episodes where Dipper apologizes to Mabel for being a white male
>a few more episodes written by my girl Dana where Dipper harshly rejects and treats Candy like shit because WMAF is bad and inherently anti-feminist
>an episode that parodies Pokemon, Zelda, or any other normie nintoddler franchise
>revert Pacifica back to being evil, and a whole arc of episodes devoted to her father Preston trying to Build The Wall around the mystery shack to keep the deplorable Pines out of his city
>the final boss is an evil corporation who takes over the mystery shack and tries to make its own mystery shack merchandise without Stan's permission
This
>Add third season
>Don't rush the storyline
>Move "Dipper and Mabel vs the Future" to be the mid-season 3 finale
>More episodes dedicated to Weirdmageddon
>Adventures to different dimensions, can't believe the wasted potential after reading Journal 3
>Characters important to the lore like Axolotl and The Oracle actually appearing in the show rather than simply popping up in side material
>More scary monsters like the island head
>Actually pace the episodes properly, don't add filler like "Roadside Attraction" that could interrupt the narrative flow
>Final episode should be entirely about the aftermath of Weirdmageddon and tying up loose ends like helping Stan recover his memories, Ford making amends with Fiddleford, the Journals getting thrown into the Bottomless Pit, Dipper and Mabel's birthday, and them leaving Gravity Falls.
>This one is personal but maybe change Bill's goal from simply being an anarchist to being the show's version of Nyarlathotep who wants to break the Outer Gods free into our reality
1) Turn the material from the books into a third season.
2) Make "Not What He Seems" into the season two finale.
3) Follow through with the sibling schism plot.
4) Build up towards the Wheel.
5) End the Wendy crush plot at "Boyz Crazy."
6) Tell "Escape from Reality" from Mabel's perspective. Really just re-tweak the episode as a whole.
Was there something wrong with GF? I thought people loved it.
Fixed.
it was, the second half of season 2 was just too rushed and there was a lot of wasted potential
Easy. Tell you to fuck right off because I enjoyed it and don't need your negativity. Just let it be, dude. Find something else to focus your time on.
Remove the Dipper/Wendy/Robbie love triangle entirely, it'd make the show a lot better despite waifuism.
Pic-related is another good one; expand on the Nightmare Realm so the henchmaniacs don't come out of nowhere.
nothing it was perfect. hehehe
Make “Not What He Seems” into the season finale.
Make the search of the author more extensive
Develop Pacifica a bit more.
Focus on Wendy as a character, dedicate the episode to her like Blendin’s Game and Northwest Mystery Noir did on Soos and Pacifica. Maybe talk about her dead mom.
Yeah, maybe establish those nightmare monsters as pre-existing threats first. Like the shapeshifter
Tell me Dr. Goobermeister if you can, you have complained so much, what is it exactly you have created? Can you show me even one cartoon? I thought not.
Shift "Into the Bunker" into an S3 episode. Instead of more "Dipper crushes on Wendy" shlock, rewrite it as a Stan and Ford episode.
I would prefer to change the design of the Nightmare Realm from a simple hellscape to being more strange and alien, like a trippy mash of different animation styles and unique cinematography.
I'll admit I found Season 2 slightly Rushed but i think it turned out as good as it could considering Alex Hirsch only came back for Season 2 because of The Fans.
Add incest
This. Making Ford a morally grey antagonist in his desire to get rid of Bill as well as the craziness he got from being in other dimensions for 30 years would have made him leagues ahead as a villain.
You can still have him reconcile with Stan at the end.
But no, that would require ~writing~.
Why would Bill unleash his goons and not just grab Ford himself with his psychic powers? Kind of retarded on his part. I feel like Bill wasn't even trying.
Make Mabel not a cunt
Make Stan's memory not come back immediately
Gonna post some stuff that could have been
(Part 1)
>There was going to be an episode based on the David Bowie film Labyrinth. Mabel would love the film, but Dipper would hate it due to a fear of puppets. Dipper wouldn't admit to being afraid of the puppet; he would just call it dumb. Mabel would summon the Goblins to take Dipper away so she could watch the film. The Goblins would come out of the film take Dipper to the Labyrinth. The Goblin King would try to get Mabel to go through the labyrinth to find Dipper, but Mabel would instead want to spend time with the Goblin King. The episode would end with Dipper admitting his fear of puppets. The episode wasn't made because the studio execs didn't think the audience would get the reference, but they still managed to sneak a Labyrinth reference into one of the "Mabel's Guide to Life" shorts (where Mabel, Grenda and Candy dress Soos up as the Goblin King for one of their "flash makeovers").
>"Sweater Off Dead" would've been about Mabel finding a sweater at a swap meet that was haunted by the ghost of the old lady who'd died wearing it who possesses her. This would lead to the gang getting trapped inside the Mystery Shack where they'd have to perform a sweater exorcism on her using knitting needles. While the episode never came to be, Hirsch liked the image of Mabel being possessed Exorcist-style which lead to the idea being used in "The Inconveniencing".
>"Jimmy Snakes" would've been about an old biker friend of Stan's coming to town, who has a Ghost Rider-esque curse. You can see Stan's old biker helmet in his room in Scary-oke, which was meant to be a hint towards this episode.
>One second season episode was to have Waddles catch a severe illness with Mabel being forced to visit Gideon in jail as he was the one with the antidote.
(Part 2)
>The reason why Wendy never got a full-fledged episode of her own was because the crew never felt like any idea they came up with for a Wendy episode would gel well with her personality. One such episode would've focused on her home life where she would somehow gain weather controlling powers. The episode was very close to being produced before Hirsch scrapped it to write the episode that ultimately became "The Last Mabelcorn" in just two days (which explains why he's the sole writer of that episode).
>One unused episode, turned into an unused page of Journal 3, was about Dipper and Mabel selling Stan merchandise door-to-door after Grunkle Stan ordered too many bobbleheads. One of the people interested in buying the bobbleheads is a mysterious doll collector who wants to make Dipper and Mabel part of her collection, having already done so with Gideon.
>Hirsch described another Wendy/Stan B-plot pitch that never came to fruition at the Amazing Houston Comic Con, where Wendy was threatened by her dad to avoid trouble, before she goes on a museum heist with Stan.
>Hirsch wanted Bob Odenkirk to play Stan but he turned the offer down.
>Hirsch wanted David Lynch to play Bill Cipher, but he declined. Alex later said that it turned out to be a blessing, because not having to work around his schedule allowed them to turn Bill into the Big Bad.
>Danny DeVito turned down a role.
>Hirsch really wanted David Duchovny and Gillian Anderson (Mulder and Scully) to have a role on the show but they were too busy.
>In the storyboards for "The Love God", the Love God originally hooked the old lady up with another old lady. His necklace also originally included the symbol for transgender/genderqueer as well as the traditional male and female symbols.
How about making the jokes funny or well timed ? Also, how about daring to take a serious stand on the dramatic elements, instead of undercutting every attempt at drama or seriousness with a joke or one liner ?
(Part 3)
>In an interview, Hirsch revealed that Bill Cipher was originally meant to play a much smaller role in the series, playing a comic relief role by merely invading Dipper's dreams and yelling conspiracy theories at him just to annoy him.
>The Stinger for "Little Gift Shop of Horrors" was originally going to involve a Twist Ending where the viewer was actually M. Night Shyamalan, but they were unable to get the director to agree to the joke.
>In the original script for "Weirdmageddon Part II", Dipper kills Dippy Fresh by snapping his neck onscreen in a rather graphic manner.
>In the pilot, Journal 3 is instead a book titled "Dr. Crackpot's Index of the Damned".
>Gideon's hair was originally going to be revealed to be a wig concealing his parasitic, half-formed conjoined twin brother.
>It was considered early on for the show to go for three seasons, but Hirsch was so exhausted that by mid-season 1, he knew it wouldn't go any longer than two. The first season was actually so exhausting that Hirsch seriously considered ending the show there, cliffhanger and all. He credits Jon Stewart with convincing him to give the story a proper ending.
>The original ending to "Blendin’s Game" had Dipper and Mabel use the time wish to bring Soos’s son from the future to meet his father and let him know that he grows up to be an amazing dad.
>There was going to be a scene that showed just how Gideon found Journal 2. He found it while playing in the woods by himself.
>A Gravity Falls film was, at one point, being considered, but Hirsch ultimately decided against it when he was told it would only be a TV movie, instead of a theatrical release.
>Bill Cipher was originally going to be green, but Hirsch changed him to yellow because he thought he looked too much like a leaf.
(Part 4)
>According to the commentary for "Dipper and Mabel vs. the Future", Mabel was going to find out she couldn't bring Waddles back home with her, further fueling Mabel's heartbreak about the future.
>Old Man McGucket's name was going to be "Crazy Larry", but it was changed because the word "Crazy" was deemed offensive.
>Neil Cicierega composed two unused themes for the show, and an unused Villain Song for Bill cut from "Weirdmageddon Part 1".
Here's the Bill song by the way:
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