twitter.com
>go in and find the best or worst pitch you see
>post it here
#bettercartoon
Sebastian Peterson
Ryder Cooper
>actually going to twitter
I'd rather shoot myself and make my family watch, desu.
And I love my family.
Brandon Taylor
What's with Burbank twitter and thinking crying in cartoons is amazing?
Parker James
Is the animation industry just constant twitter drama?
Oliver Hall
People made fun of them when they cried as kids, and instead of growing a backbone and toughening up, they decided that everybody should always cry about everything.
They're a tortured minority, you know? Being non-binary is really hard and totally not a self-imposed crisis.
Anthony Sullivan
This one is by far the worst
Luke Smith
>KAIJU DAYZ is about a single mother Kaiju raising her two teenagers on Monster Island. Written as a comedy/action cartoon it's a love-letter to Kaiju media as well as family sitcoms!
Mason Lee
The surprise is that all three of them are trans.
Thomas Nguyen
That is like, the ultimate hipster fantasy
Isaiah Clark
Good, spend some time with them.
Xavier Hernandez
Thinly veiled fetish
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Christian Sanchez
I wonder when user will deliver with the porn.
Austin Harris
>Lodestar- A story about super-powerful cowboys beating each other senseless. Winner sews the loser's hat on top of theirs. The taller the hat, the stronger the fighter!
Jackson Moore
Ok yeah but the one on the bottom left looks lewd
Henry Kelly
Posting from previous bread
Leo Anderson
Too narrow of a premise, mucha lucha already did it
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Chase Nguyen
Yes. If you are watching American animation over anime as an adult, something is clearly wrong with you.
Chase Ramirez
Isaac Green
Colton Howard
No, the worst one was the fat fetish one
Daniel Williams
>Take incredible thing
>Make it mundane
DEATH! Death I say, to clean up this plague. The novelty has become the norm. This is one of the two things that killed Marvel comics, you mongrel bastards.
Jace Jackson
Can't get a show out of this concept. A pilot, at best.
Dominic Torres
Let's just recognize this whole vent for hat it is. The twitter outrage mob is just pissed off about a show created by a white guy, more than any other aspect of this whole thing. Either reboot, humor style, channel, etc. It's just about the race of the creator.
Xavier Phillips
Sounds like Dobson came up with this one.
Ayden Perez
Gabriel Carter
This looks more like a parody of a shitty pitch
Brody Brown
Wander over Yonder mixed with SU
Dylan Wilson
No, but is correct
Colton Reyes
Jace Taylor
>I was hesitant to post my old cartoon idea cuz it needs a lot of work and its from years ago, but this is Apocalypse Kids (working title, not final), my cartoon concept about a world where only kids survived the apocalypse and they rebuild together
Hudson Turner
So far the furry Egyptian god one is the only pitch I actually want to watch.
Jaxson Thomas
I actually like this.
Easton Green
this feels more like an game concept if anything
Jonathan Jackson
Am i the only one excited for the new ren and stimpy
Sebastian Barnes
Christopher Sanchez
I'd pick this one
Jack Turner
Connor Green
This one didn't even have a log line. It's just a couple fetish pics with a quickly crapped out caption.
Ryan Anderson
Tyler Campbell
>A bunch of dolts in 2124 are stuck in nuke-struck Mississippi where soil and water no longer exist; just sand, burnt trees, and ominous blue puddles of toxic waste. Some want to restore the world back to order, others just want to survive. Shenanigans ensue
Jaxon Gutierrez
The kids would be dead before the next day, little lamplight can only exist if children are unkillable.
Thomas Peterson
The fucking character design is hideous
Aiden Wright
Ren and Stimpy is why we have Family Guy.
Nicholas Green
I've got a challenge for you all/ Find me a pitch that does not include one of the following:
>identify politics
>"learning how to adult"
>slice of life
>magic/supernatural/basic entry-level mystery
>space adventure
>forest/wilderness setting
>"it's about emotions"
>"my personal identity must be really interesting to the kids of today!"
>show idea is basically therapy for the creator's personal problems
>rock stars
>"I'm making a statement!"
>no attention paid to marketability or merchandise opportunities, which studios actually want
Isaiah Kelly
Dylan Lee
Worst one is the one about the kids crying that isn't the op
Brayden Johnson
cute apple girl, desu, but i don't know if it'd be able to get an whole show in that concept. They'd have to stretch it way too far.
Zachary Gonzalez
>for the bugs - 4 irish kids deal with a parasite they found
No Irish person looks like this
Levi Cox
Cameron Murphy
Generic but doable, could be greenlit
MMS bom but gay
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Could work as a low budget AS show
Don't make about a family, just two characters brother and sister
Onward already happed chump
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Creepy mr enter undertones
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Spiderman is already a thing sweetie
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Seek mental help, schizo
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Cute designs that don't fit on the premise
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Stop ripping off Dr Stone
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Nathaniel White
This is how they want Ireland to look in 10 years so
Hudson Turner
try to filter out the world self and everything related to it and you'll already remove half of them, filter entry, generic level fantasy and you'll only get thinly veiled fetish: the show pitches.
Daniel James
>of the week
Wow, it is everything Zig Forums has ever wanted.
Jordan Barnes
Alexander Lewis
That sounds cool, what?
Julian Edwards
100% support for these
interested
Jacob Morris
Jeremiah Stewart
Not enough white people so it's bad according to Zig Forums.
Benjamin Barnes
Wow, so original. I bet it would be better than that ripoff Infinity Train.
Cameron Sanders
It looks cool but this is literally fucking Infinity Train
Jackson Brown
it'd be either posession/demongirl fetish or "le past bad"
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David Ward
>Swept Away-A pitch about a group of sisters who have to clean up their house that transports them to other dimensions. The only way to tidy up each room is to solve the problems in each world.
Grayson Nguyen
Your show will never be greenlit
Jack Martin
A show being kinda similar to another show ist not really an indictment of it
Kayden Ward