Discussion thread, pls don't delete
What did you think of issue #1?
Discussion thread, pls don't delete
What did you think of issue #1?
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Well, I am not big fan of tournament arc + Bianca lost her persistent character and become really soft (but I hope she will develop in the story).
I like Loki's new design, as well as his more cartoon-like emotions.
if choose between new or old plot, then I'll choose old (I'm more interested in the cult than the tournament arch).
But again maybe it will better in the next issue
Did he fix the issue about how the cartoon people and the "real" people are totally interchangeable and share no aesthetic or design difference?
bump
Like I said in the last thread, Pan really needs to work on his panel to panel guidance. There's so much text on the screen that halts the reader and action that doesn't flow well. If he would've uploaded page by page he would've been able to improve but, releasing it all at once was a testament to his limited ability as someone who's never made a comic before.
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eh, sorta, some characters got redesigned to look more human, like the main character and the mean girls
Kind of. Humans look like humans and cartoons all have exaggerated designs to set them apart, but the twins Pan voices in his videos have green skin. Those are the only two who stand out, the rest of the human cast is more toned down compared to the cartoons
It's kinda funny how horny he was when he designed them, then he got ugly female friends and redesigned them to have ugly human avatars except his self-inserts.
yeah I liked the old comics better, I guess i'm just not a big fan of big flashy fights so I liked the more slice of life story from the original
>The cult sideploy was scrapped
I hope it'll come to the fold later on
Link?
Here you go, the old comic is on his tumblr
lokiirl.tumblr.com
>not big fan of tournament arc
Pan is that you?
Wait is he really still going for it after the adult swim catastrophy, like Jesus christ.
I wish I was him
>the adult swim catastrophy
please explain
Why would you ever want to be Pan, the man is a living spill your spegit meme at all time.
Panelling is garbage and it feels like every other time a western anime fan attempts to imitate the shonen battle genre.
The art is also really flat, it looks and feels more like a graphic design project than it reads like a comic.
Why wouldn't he?
He tried to pitch it on an AS stream. He came off as generally unprepared and too casual (I think he thought it was fine because AS).
He pitched his show to [as] with genndy and some other bloke.
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Pan drops his spaghetti and asks them "If you could fuck a cartoon, wouldnt you?"'
Pan should stick to youtube
Do you think the "working as a designer for a reboot that was cancelled because of AT&T" thing was real? If so, what do you think it was?
He droped the entire pasteria mamá mia infront of everyone and his own favorite icon, at one point he asks Genndy If he would fuck his cartoons if given the chance.
He really shouldn't. He should branch out more.
It seems like he's particularly interested in designing things like logos and characters. He would do well to capitalize on that.
Exactly.
Do you still cry while masturbating?
No. hes a one note faggot and should stick to making top 5 videos until he grows the balls to hang himself.
pan does have talent. he's probably the one making these threads, so i bet he's listening.
i think that spilling your spaghetti in front of genndy tartakovsky is probably a big hit to morale, but taking his advice to heart will really help him. focus on characters, make us care, hold back on the horny "nguuhhh goth girls and you can fuck cartoons." if you can't hold back on that, you'd better develop your world damn good. out-of-placers and made in abyss have barely contained fetish shit, but it's tolerable due to the depth and detail of the worldbuilding.
panel readability is big. scott mccloud's "Understanding Comics" and "Making Comics" are extremely helpful reads, and i think it would take some of the stress off him to understand the craft a bit more. pic related is an issue with staging, as the two panels were so similar in composition, i thought loki had morphed into catarina for a second.
has a point. he has a talent for graphic design, and in a pinch i bet he could get some work designing logos for some cash, to support his comic and get a name out in the art world other than "that one cartoon reviewer guy"
loki irl has potential, just don't reboot it if you get dissatisfied. you made it, you have to fix it.