Made a comic

Looking for feedback let me know what you think

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looking for constructive input please no flaming

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its 15 or 20 pages

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i put a lot of time into it so i hope you like it

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hello?

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gonna take a break from dumping to go eat let me know if you want more

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keep going i need it

Can I get a quick rundown?

I have no idea what is going on but I love it. Continue the dump user, the upload must be complete.

here we go

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Do you have a website? This is unironically good. Art style on par with PilotRedSun. Godspeed OP, link your Patreon!

What do you think will happen next before I post it

nope no patreon or anything a few people have compared my stuff to theirs but im not a fan of it. my autism is all natural.

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The Ring

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youtube.com/watch?v=kWZVKU5imx0

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Pros:
Interesting art style and premise

Cons:
Relies too much on memes for a crutch

Constructive Criticism:
Don't be afraid to be your own person and develop your own jokes and memes. Doing so makes you fresher and more memorable.

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Pros:
God-tier art style
Ingenious storytelling
Savant-grade creativity

Cons:
None

Constructive Criticism:
None

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fin

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sorry this one goes between

and

i always fuck up the order my bad

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wait it goes after those 2, whoops.