New chapter.
Danchigai
Yayoi a shit
what a slut
tank bonus pages
what a dork
I'll take necktie imouto
KEKED AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I got a little tapestry but I don't think I'll hang it up lest I'm mistaken as some incestuous freak.
Imagine being insecure about this much.
>mistaken
*exposed
If she gets that dere with just some praise I'd pay to see what happens if he were to tell her he loves her
>senpais
In this case, "older students" covers it fine. There are reasons for using "senpai" for direct address or possessives, but you don't lose anything by using an English equivalent in general cases like this.
>diligent or
diligent, or
>because even
because, even
Also, what's the "UH?" about? Is it supposed to be surprise, like "huh?"?
>this is
that's
I would put a ... after "do you think" so it's not mistaken as a stand-alone sentence.
>could be changing
would
>the temperature during the day
the daytime temperature
>they weren't
it isn't
>I'm already getting nervous on the first day
It's my first day and I'm already getting nervous...
>Nakano senpai
Nakano-senpai
For the title, maybe "Danchi-gai: Outside the Apartment" would work. If you think that gets across that the title is wordplay, we probably don't need the note.
>famous by any
famous, by
>I know him, he
him.
>people he said
people, he
Is explaining the reference necessary? It could be condensed to "*see Shimaichigai" under the panel if it is.
>in-universe 1 year
in-universe: 1 year
>time 9
time: 9
>animated and
animated, and
The staff and special thanks are blank.
>draw white, wrinkled shirt at an angle
>apply a flat, consistent-pattern tone
>call it a checkered shirt
Man I just love these 2 dorks. Pretty much the most underrated sibling duo on Zig Forums
Yayoi a qt 3.14
>Also, what's the "UH?" about?
I saw it as an embarrassed "uhh", not a surprised one.
>Danchi-gai: Outside the Apartment
This both kills the joke and is innacurate, since "danchi" is the whole complex, maybe a single building at worst. And I want the note in there, as clunky as it is.
>Is explaining the reference necessary?
You'd have to ask the author, because that's his note.
You didn't want to include all the other extras? There's some nice stuff in there.
She's so in bread, even her imagination is only filled with her siblings.
>Sakura's ribbon
You a hippo crit
her bread needs to be filled by her sibling if you catch my drift
After 100+ chapters, I finally know the meaning of the title.