One Piece has become too repetitive, so how would you rewrite One Piece given your current knowledge of events in One Piece?
How would you rewrite One Piece?
I'll start, the most important element would not be introducing Haki which turned the series into braindead powerscaling garbage.
>Drastically reduce Islands and introduced characters, especially after the timeskip
>Have the Strawhats actually do Pirate stuff such as ship battles and plundering early on. The Strawhats might plunder some Islands or ships before they realize that it is the wrong action to take.
>Marines are slightly more relevant to further emphasize the Pirate theme
>Have the crew be complete before the timeskip
>Keep the story close to how it was in the original but have the Strawhats become much stronger during the Timeskip.
>Raftel is only discoverable by an eternal log pose
>Rayleigh tells Luffy that an old crewmember of Roger has the only Eternal pose to raftel
>The Strawhats are now in search of the crewmember, usual chaos ensures
All of your ideas sucks, but this
>Raftel is only discoverable by an eternal log pose
was deliberately shat on by Luffy in a glorious fashion. Fuck you.
>All of your ideas sucks
All fan theories sound trash however if Oda 100% copied any fan theory people would still praise him.
>Luffy didn't like the Idea
I don't care what Luffy says, it's about speeding up the process of going to Raftel, making it more fun to read and staying true to the adventure theme which is exactly what the eternal log pose would achieve.
One Piece has way too many problems to be fixable, you're basically asking me to write a whole new series
Luffy should have found One Piece by now.
>One Piece has way too many problems to be fixable
Name some. You can always keep the story but simply change some aspects like I did.
It should have or at least would be much more interesting to read if the plot was still clear to follow which is why I chose the idea of the log pose and eliminated the cause of the problem, the Poneglyphs.
You need the Red poneglyphs to find One Piece
honestly, just change up punk hazard (to not be shit) and dressrosa and wano (to not be so formulaic) and give more focus to the crew post ts and im happy
Completely rewrite the entire setting, the Red Line and Four Blues is the dumbest shit possible in worldbuilding. The one piece world would have two large continents that they never go to and around these continents are island chains this is where the story happens. The government in these island areas are really horrible so they constantly suffer from rampant piracy, and the continental nations dont give a flying fuck about it. The story would be Luffys adventures in each island chain instead of this braindead Grand Line plotline to find Laugh Tale.
All things that I think about One Piece is: Start the reading of this manga now is like a suicide!
>Remove Haki altogether of just have Conquerors only
>Garp comes to arrest Arlong after Luffy beats him, because what prevented him from attacking the villagers after SH left
>Pell, Conis' dad & Sabo stay dead
>FI would be all adventure/SH catching up with each other over the 2 years with Big Mom call being the tension portion
>Omit Tontatta
>Vivi joins at Dressrosa colesseum and consumes the Mera Mera
So the Strawhats just go from Island to Island doing what? Would they still have an overall goal similar to finding Laugh Tale?
>Vivi joins at Dressrosa colesseum and consumes the Mera Mera
Why?
Not bad user. Good taste. You forgot one thing.
>Robin becomes a highly relevant character.
There, together we fixed One Piece.
People always say: "remove haki", while I agree that with the introduction of haki it kinda ruined fights but how would you even beat strong devil fruit user then? Crocodile and Enel were good examples by defeating them with some creativity but stuff like that won't work on a lot of OP devil fruit users, simply removing haki is not gonna solve a lot. I may be wrong, I dunno.
Its simple delete logias.
>but how would you even beat strong devil fruit user then?
You don't. There's seastone but you can't even dream of being able to touch someone like Kizaru or Enel with it. If you remove Haki, there's no choice but to also remove entire tiers of characters that are impossible to beat without it.
There are plenty of logia users that are/were relevant to the plot so I guess a lot needs to be rewritten.
You're replacing one macguffin with another, what actually is the difference?
The ponyglyphs at the very least inherently bring the characters into conflict with the yonko and the world government
pretty much this but for half the crew
>how would you even beat strong devil fruit user then
>Outsmarting them
>They fall on their own sword
>Change of heart
>Everyone against the villain devil fruit user just overpowers him to the point where he can't handle his own power anymore
The Strawhats would be chasing one of Rogers old crewmember who would own the Eternal pose instead of doing the same thing 4 times. This way there would be no need for bullshit splitting up the crew which is another aspect that ruins One Piece as the reader has less connection to the main cast.
Dont fuck around for 900 chapters and just get on with it.
I'd write Law out of the series.
Give Logia fruits actual flaws instead of them being a catch all.
Like how it was with crocodile.
Flaws like what? What flaw would Akainu's magma have?
Burning through whatever he's standing on?
>Akainu sailing to location
>Pirate attack!
>turns on fruit
>sets own ship on fire, burns through the hulls and falls into the sea
It turns into rock.
I can't tell if you're joking or not.