FIST: A Warrior's Journey Into The Depths storytime

Dumping volume 1 of my manga
Do you think Shonen Jump would be interested?

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page 3
remember to read right to left

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amazing

Number 1 changed a lot over the years, huh?

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aight I'm interested

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As the old Spaniards said, The only church that illuminates is a burning church.

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Beautiful.
I like this.

Ahh, like a reverse Angel Densetsu.

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is she crying or did she just cream herself from how badass this guy

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Holy fuck.

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bottom right panel is unironic kino

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Oh this is wonderful.

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Ohh. I don't like this.

What did you think? Is it ready for publication? I poured my heart and soul into this work

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Already better visual storytelling than hxh

>borderline scat
DROPPED

incredible

It represents Fist's decent into darkness, by inhaling his mother's farts he's accepting his inner demons
you wouldn't understand

What's next for Fist?

Absolute top tier shit there (perhaps literally).

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