It’s time for the biweekly TL effort of Mitsudomoe, made by the author of the BokuYaba.
This is a second thread to give TL user a chance to post his translations.
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The JP transcript is there as well.
Just gonna dump some Hitoha x Sensei pics while we wait.
Fag from scan thread here.
Translated script.
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If this pastebin doesn't work, I'll upload the script to mediafire or something
>pastebin.com
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pastebin works. Now all we need are some Cleaner and TS anons and we should be all good.
Pastebin TL:
script based on the raws
fuck your sound effects
198th egg [A Hand Tickling the Breast]
This bra's so cute...
Maybe I'll just... try it on...
Ngh... it's so tight...
Time for breakfast!
//
Micchan, how many extra bowls do you want?
None.
Wait, what?!
Thanks for the food...
I should take this off and come back...
Have you seen my underwear?
N-Noooope...
What was that sound?!
The hook snapped...
M-Maybe it's a poltergeist!!
Of course you live in a house with an evil spirit!
//
I'm sure the evil spirit took your underwa-
AGHHHH, MY...
ECTOPLASM IS....
You're pretty cheeky for a weirdo*!!
And... that "fitting"... thing doesn't hurt?
Nope. And it's super fast too.
//
Then, uh... can you do one for me right now?
ME?!
Umm... no...
But...
How is such an occultist* blushing right now?!
How have you been, Sacchan?
Great. I'm playing exorcist right now.
First, take your clothes off.
Do it right, okay?
W-What are they...?
HAH?
Now that I think about it...
Micchan looked really off this morning... I thought she was just tired from the heat...
but Matsuoka-san saw her and thought a spirit was up to something...
And it's the same thing as always...?!
Was it like this...?
She's binding her...
Um, 60...
Need to write...
She's going to write a full-body inscription...!!
Stop right there!!
Mitsujo-san!!
Wh-What?!
//
What were you doing?
Wh-Whatever we wanted!!
I remember the numbers, so don't worry.
Then should we go shopping together?
I wanna pay you back for that bra and all...
Don't worry about it...
Where are you going?!
I need to use that "beautiful genius spiritualist"* setting and...
Wh-What...?
As far as I can tell... Micchan is safe!!
You don't need to exorcise her!!
WHATWASTHAT?!
Sorry, but...
//
Mitsujo-san, you aren't qualified to make that decision!!
BFF
Ass!
Mitsujo-san...
I'm...
I'm finally free...!!
I'm not a beautiful spiritualist* anymore!
That's great...
small: "Beautiful"...
I'm home
Hehehe
Glad it worked out, Micchan.
//
Mitsujo-san, are you jealous?
Nope. Matsuoka-san is way more talented than I am to begin with.
Wanna see?
P-Pass...
The spirits won't bother you as long as you have that.
Hah?
It's a bra.
Eh?! Wha-...?
*whatever word you're using for 電波/ゆんゆん
*whatever word you're using for 天才美少女霊媒師
Dumping the RAW pages here for convenience.
I'm also working on some QC.
[Typesetter Note 1: I will leave how to show emphasis up to you.]
[Typesetter Note 2: If your font is all-caps and supports "i" with and without brackets, only use the bracketed version when "i" is used as a pronoun.
Typically, upper-case "i" will have brackets and lower-case "i" won't.
e.g. ("i" used as pronoun, bracketed)
I'll help you with that.
e.g. ("i" not used as pronoun, not bracketed)
if you really want to, you can.]
[QC Note: The title is a parody of the western film "The Hand That Rocks the Cradle." Choose whichever you prefer.
Personally, I like option 1.]
198th Egg: "The Hand That Rocks the Girdle"
198th Egg: "The Hand That Rocks the Breastplate"
198th Egg: "A Hand Tickling the Breast"
Mitsuba: What a cute bra...
Mitsuba: I'll just... Try it on real quick...
Mitsuba: Ngh... It's so tight...
SFX: fidget fidget
Hitoha: Breakfast!
Hitoha: Micchan, how many extra bowls do you want?
Mitsuba: I don't want any.
SFX: ulp...
SFX: stretch stretch
Hitoha: Wait, WHAT!?
Mitsuba: I'm done...
Mitsuba: I REALLY need to take this off...
SFX: clitter! clatter!
Matsuoka: Micchan, have you seen my bra anywhere?
SFX: ruffle ruffle
Mitsuba: N-Noooope...
SFX: SNAP!
Matsuoka: What was THAT!?
Mitsuba: Crap, the hook broke!
Mitsuba: I-it must've been a POLTERGEIST or something!
Matsuoka: I knew it! This house is FILLED with evil spirits!
SFX: Ooh! Ooh!
Mitsuba: Yeah... They're probably the ones who took your-
SFX: slip...
SFX: dangle...
Mitsuba: O-oOoOh, noOoOo~ [Typesetter Note: Please keep the varying casing in tact as these will help the delivery. If varied casing is not an option, varying font sizes are also fine.]
Mitsuba: My ectoplasm..!
SFX fwip fwip
Mitsuba: Don't give me that look!
SFX： smack!
Mitsuba: So...
Mitsuba: You mean fittings don't HURT? Like, at ALL?
Matsuoka: Nope! And they're super FAST, too!
Mitsuba: Then... Can you give me one now?
Matsuoka: Who, ME!?
Matsuoka: Umm...
Matsuoka: Well...
Matsuoka: Y-you see...
Mitsuba: You wanna get with a ghost, but THIS is where you draw the line!?
Yoshioka: How's Sacchan doing, Youngest?
Hitoha: Oh, just PEACHY... I bet she's pretending to do an exorcism right now.
SFX: step step
SFX: clack
Matsuoka: Okay... First, take off your top.
Mitsuba: J-just make sure you DO it right, okay?
SFX: slip slip
Yoshioka: Wh-what are they DOING..?
Hitoha: Ah!
Hitoha: Come to think of it...
SFX: whoa...
Hitoha: Micchan didn't seem like her usual self this morning...
Hitoha: I thought it was just due to the summer heat, but...
Hitoha: Matsuoka must've seen her and thought it was the work of a spirit...
Hitoha: So, like USUAL then!?
Matsuoka: It's exorcism time!!
SFX slump~
Matsuoka: I *think* it went like this...
SFX: tight
Yoshioka: She's *tying* her up..!
Matsuoka: Let's see... Sixty.
Matsuoka: Let me write that down...
Hitoha: Here come the full-body sutras!
Hitoha: FREEZE!!
Matsuoka: Youngest-san!
Mitsuba: Wh-WHAT!?
Hitoha: What were you guys doing?
Mitsuba: N-none of your business!
SFX: stomp stomp
Matsuoka: Don't worry, I remember the numbers.
Mitsuba: Well then, why don't we go out and buy one?
Mitsuba: Besides, I still owe you a bra from earlier...
Matsuoka: Oh, no! That's fine...
Hitoha: Where are you going!?
Hitoha: Time to put this pretty psychic prodigy misunderstanding to good use..!
Mitsuba: What are you doing..?
SFX: sway... sway...
Hitoha: As far as I can tell... Micchan is FINE!
Hitoha: She doesn't need one (an exorcism)!
Mitsuba: EXCUSE me!?
SFX: angry
Matsuoka: I'm sorry, but...
Matsuoka: I don't think you're qualified to say that, Youngest-san!
SFX: Pfft!
Mitsuba: DOOOOFUS!
Yoshioka: Y-youngest-san...
Hitoha: I'm free...
Hitoha: I'm finally FREE!! [Typesetter Note: Make this line bold, with a larger font size than the previous line. Also, make "FREE!!" extra big to give this line more impact.]
SFX: drip drip
Hitoha: I'm not the pretty psychic prodigy anymore!!
Yoshioka: I'm happy for you...
Sugisaki: "Pretty..?"
Mitsuba: We're baaack~! [Typesetter Note: Don't forget to reuse the special note character in the RAWs!]
Mitsuba: Eh heh heh!
Hitoha: Glad everything worked out for you, Micchan.
Matsuoka: Are you jealous, Youngest-san?
Hitoha: N-not at all! You've become MUCH more capable than I am, Matsuoka-san!
Mitsuba: Wanna see?
Hitoha: Uhh... Sure...
SFX: all over
Hitoha: With that on you, spirits should finally leave you alone.
Mitsuba: Huh?
Mitsuba: You mean the bra?
Hitoha: Wait... WHAT!?
SFX: flash
Matsuoka: Your bra has that kind of power!?
Hitoha: Aaaaahh!
SFX: serious
Mitsuba: I just BOUGHT that thing!!
SFX: namu namu namuuu~
If someone can volunteer to clean the pages while we wait for a TS user, feel free to do so!
You can post a zip containing your PSD files so the TS user can typeset from there and tweak things as necessary.
Alternatively, you can just post your final cleaned pages like last time.
Every little bit helps!
>Mitsujo wasn't her name, but her status as 3rd daughter
>her name was mitsujo and not Sacchan
Welp, for not having read the series, I still think it came out okay.
>Welp, for not having read the series, I still think it came out okay.
Agreed, many thanks for your TL efforts, user!
For your reference, 3rd daughter is actually pronounced "sanjou" instead of "mitsujo" in-universe, but yeah it is a bit confusing that they omitted that detail for the furigana.
To whoever is going to clean and typeset this, don't forget to set the image mode to grayscale!