How would you rewrite please don’t bully me, nagatoro?

How would you rewrite please don’t bully me, nagatoro?

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Nagatoro is an actual bully and senpai has to work to change her.

Nagatoro is an actual bully and senpai marries her and is constantly physically and emotionally abused for the rest of his life

reverse genders

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Nagatoro is an actual bully and because of this senpai's defenses are too raised for her actual genuine attempts at affection (which are shitty because she has a room temperature IQ and bully autism) to be recognized as romantic advances

Senpai stops attending school, becomes a NEET, and shitposts in woman hate threads on Zig Forums until he dies of malnutrition. Naga marries a cold and impotent salary man, becomes obese, and dies of a heart attack infront of the television at age 57.

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Yknow, if you think about it, this manga would get a lot of backlash if the genders were reverse, like imagine the chapter where Naga layer on top of naoto in the attempt to bite his neck, or when naga and her friends start stepping on his back in the beach chapter

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Why not make an AU chapter with inverted genders?

an actual rival for Naga, a girl who Senpai is actually interested in and has things in common that they can talk about (not Prez, she's on a different wavelenght)

Gamo, Yoshi and Sakura would go from teasing Naga to getting tired of her bullshit real fast and work behind the scenes to help her overcome her clumsiness disguised as bullying

Nagatoro's bullying is initially too strong and hurts Senpai severely, but Senpai's own self-worth is initially too little to care about the pain. Seeing that he's close to the border of neurosis, Nagatoro learns to curb the bullying into a physical form of behavioral therapy, fostering self-worth in Senpai by encouraging him to challenge manageable obstacles.

After he becomes relatively well-adjusted, Nagatoro stops the therapy entirely, after which Senpai asserts that he owes Nagatoro a lot for helping him pull himself out from his pit of self-loathing. He then guides her into holding back less, this time with him being able to shrug it off (within reason).

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Go full on serious drama. Nagatoro rapes senpai and blackmails him into doing her bidding. Sadistic torments and torture commences. "Please, not my anus, Nagatoro!!!!"

>Please, not my anus again, Nagatoro!

More lewds and more sadism.

>Naga rapes him in chapter 1 by rubbing her foot on his crotch through his pants
>this continues to chapter 6 when she actually sees it and nearly wets herself
>the rest of the manga is her trying to push paisen further and further until he snaps and bends her over
>however, in encouraging more assertive behaviors, she’s made him more attractive to others and has to show dominance in order to avoid being cucked

You haven't read much shoujo manga aimed at teenage girls, have you?

Nagatoro is pregnant and her mood swings make her a tsundere bully and we see her belly grow in realtime so every month it gets a bit bigger and the manga has a fake out ending when she gives birth but it has a 2 month timeskip to reveal that she's pregnant again and it keeps going as long as I want.

Make it realistic.

Nagatoro bullies senpai and flirts with senpai and senpai develops a crush.
Senpai wants to confess but it turns out she just was flirting and liked the attention/making him react, turns out she actually starts dating an older chad who has graduated and has a car and rails her on the regular.
They break up, senpai finally gets a chance to confess his love, and she rejects him saying she'd never date a loser like him.

She goes on to marry a rich chad while senpai becomes a salaryman who works too much and gets paid too little. Commits sudoku.

Nagatoro finds out about it and says "oh that's too bad" then instantly moves on with her life.

This is what I hoped the manga could’ve been in a alternate universe. A lot of people say this manga have character development with naoto becoming more assertive and nagatoro being nicer, but the manage never show moments where they developed into that, there isn’t many moments were previously naoto wasn’t confident enough to do until his relationship with nagatoro, and for nagatoro there isn’t much instance were she act nicer other than the story toning her done

I agree, the story lacks the early signs of maladaptive behavior that later chapters would refute. If I weren't already working on my novels I'd take a crack at inserting those missing bits in-between the chapters.

imagine don't bully me nagatoro, but its a thirsty girl teasing some dork of a Zig Forums main character

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give Nagatoro stronger competition.

Would you mind sharing what ideas you thought of? (If you have any)

>Zig Forums user asks if nagatoro is an archeologist
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I haven't kept up with the chapters as of late, but it'd be things like Nagatoro and Senpai's inner thoughts carrying stronger hints of sadism and worthlessness, respectively. Their emotions have to be intense enough for the reader to actually mull on their supposed disconnect to their physical actions, which would hook both the fanbase that knew about the violent initial draft and the more idealistic newbies that take the outward appearances at face value.

Knowing how to portray "personal belief" as multi-faceted is a tricky technique even for the best writers.

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I would not. However I would put a gun on Nanashi's head and force him to make them become a couple before chapter 100.

They have sex.