Ib - Instant Bullet storytime (part 2)

Continuing ib storytime now that I'm awake.

Previous Thread:
To recap, MC and thirsty slut went on a date-

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-after they rescue/stop a girl -

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-who was the daughter of a brothel cum toilet

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Now that we're all caught up, here's chapter 14.
Time for some edge

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Yume ;_;

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It gets worse

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I hope aka comes back to this, and starts fresh. It has a lot of potential, but the pacing was insanely rushed

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He poured a lot of soul into IB and he can't do what he wants with kaguya so they gave him oshi no ko to dump his inner thoughts on

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Someone asked him in the twitter Q&A if he was planning on writing IB again, and he said that they (producers or editors) don't think it would sell.

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It's a pity. Aka has learned to temper his edge with Kaguya. I believe that if he tried again, we'd get the flaws ironed out.
At the very least, I still like Yume and Sera more than all of the Kaguya girls.

>A bullet is filled with explosives.
Well not really, but.... close enough for a japanese noguns.

You could feel some of the edgy stuff leak into kaguya. They really don't want him to write what he wants, they just want a cash cow.

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Early Kaguya was great precisely because of that lingering edge. It was a fluffy romcom but it also left very clear that both MCs were fucked up in the head.

>I still like Yume and Sera more than all of the Kaguya girls
They're really fleshed out and organic since he's writing from the heart.
That's not to say he didn't do a good job with some of the kaguya girls.

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Sera is the most accurate depiction of psychopathy I've seen in any media ever.

She's so beautiful, it's not fair.

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I'm not too much of a fan of sera, but god I love yume so fucking much

I dunno man, I think it's just typical women behavior. Or maybe that's just from where I'm from

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