Another week of SYD, hopefully edit and ts anons show up.
SYD
Adrian Bennett
William Bailey
597
[right] Uomi Chihiro: Eiryou High School Student Council President
On these days
It's cold.
It sure is.
These days are all about hotpots.
Hotpots~
And hotpots are about dark hotpots.
That's the one you chose?
Taka Head
Isaac Price
Good morning
Brayden Gonzalez
Comic 1
Uninvited Guest
And so, they had a hotpot party where everyone brought their own ingredients.
Kotomi, there's one more bowl here. (small) We're only 6.
Ah.
I actually
Can "see people" (small) So yeah.
Sorry, I actually just made a mistake.
Comic 2
Sadistic choice
Are we about ready now?
This looks good.
Time to eat!
Taka-kun, I'll serve you some.
Thanks.
Here.
Ganmodoki tofu
Xiao Long Bao
Daikon raddish
These choices are extremely scalding hot!! [TN note: All these food have ingredients which absorb the soup, so it makes them super hot when eating fresh.]
Benjamin James
Comic 1
Compatibility 0
Eh
Is this takoyaki?
Takoyaki fits surprisingly well with hotpots.
You're right.
This is good.
Some things may look like a mismatch at first glance,
But they turn out surprisingly well.
Like Orcs and female knights.
It's so hot she can't speak ->
Comic 2
Perfect timing
Wow, winter hotpots really are the best.
It's hot...
I'll take this coat off.
After all, you can see lighter clothes during winter.
I don't have such imprudent thoughts.
Aiden Hughes
Comic 1
They managed to eat it
Flat udon
Sluurrp
Deliiicious!
The dashi is working, huh.
But maybe we put too much.
Yeah.
[side] A lot
If there's too many, Taka-nii can noodle his noodle with it. [masturbation joke/pun]
I'm going to force everyone to finish this.
Comic 2
Looking back on the ytear
The year is ending soon, huh.
Yeah.
Is there anything left you want to do this year?
Hmmm, aside from this.
I actually have something.
Oh president, that's rare.
I wanna try ringing the new year's bell, even just once!!
Well, we can't do that at all this year.
[endnote] Winter hotpots are on a different level!! But eating a hotpot surrounded by girls, is even more awesome!!
Nathaniel Cox
Hudson White
A nice little set of curvy bumps as we wait.
Jaxon Martin
References to the passage of time in this series will always be funny.
Robert Brown
A little Suzu's mom for good measure
Jaxon Smith
Nathaniel Cook
And another Suzu from the back, because it's as flat as her front.
Bentley Morales
Her daughter's uniform doesn't fit her at all.
Kayden Turner
In all the important places.
Owen Richardson
RiP
Joshua Powell
Starting cleaning now.
Christian Torres
Too soon, yeah.
Grayson Rivera
I has my own Suzu now.
Brayden Parker
Putting together the unproofed script and TSing the cleans until PRanon gets here. I did some redraws that I think needed to be done but might be controversial as it's for SFX kind of inside and kind of outside a speech bubble. Basically had to redraw a margin and a tiny bit of the bubble on P002 so when I put the SFX in it won't look super empty. Just one of the problems of taking vertical text and making it horizontal. The way I envision it is the SFX will be white stroked so it'll have a similar effect on the line but it won't be affecting the lines as much as the original. Posting the clean so you can see how it looks before TSing.
Jackson Evans
Whats the pun here?
Is Dark Hotpots some euphemism I don't get. Beyond something like 'dark holes' or whatever.
Ethan Nelson
PR here
give some time and I'll get on it
Jonathan Hughes
Yaminabes are where you make a hotpot with ingredients you don't let anyone know about. So it's a random ingredient hotpot.
Christian Gomez
I guess for 'see people' you could do, "there are unseeable figures among us" or something of that nature.
So that the joke works in English.
Dylan Perez
Ahh. I'd say leave that untranslated then.
So people know its a proper noun and not some kind of word play.
Gabriel Johnson
lighter -> Less maybe
I thought they were talking about colors or something at first.
Hudson Cox
Another series in which public morals girl is highly erotic.
Hunter Rodriguez
would this be better as "these sorts of days are" or does that break the joke from the title?
Xavier Lee
I'm done with unproofed TSing. Just bumping the thread with this post.
Ryder Gutierrez
I like Igarashi way more than I like Takahama.
Blake Mitchell
How does this makes you feel?
Noah Jenkins
I think that should be fine
Sebastian Parker
What a cute married couple
Juan Bailey
Too tall.
Mason King
597
[right] Uomi Chihiro: Eiryou High School Student Council President
On these days
It's cold.
It sure is.
>>>These days are all about hotpots.
On these days it's all about hotpots. [not sure this needs changing at all, I leave it to you if it's any better]
Hotpots~
And hotpots are about dark hotpots.
That's the one you chose?
Taka Head
[note: Dark Nabe - Yaminabe, a hot pot party where guests bring secret ingredients and add them to the pot in the dark, seen in quite a lot of seres where characters attempt to troll each other by adding the worst possble ingredients.] [Of course this is SYD so Ujiie could be alluding to some sort of sex party thing?]
Comic 1
Uninvited Guest
And so, they had a hotpot party where everyone brought their own ingredients.
Kotomi, there's one more bowl here. (small) We're only 6.
Ah.
>>>I actually
Actually I
Can "see people" (small) So yeah.
>>>Sorry, I actually just made a mistake.
Sorry, actually I just made a mistake.
Comic 2
Sadistic choice
Are we about ready now?
This looks good.
Time to eat!
Taka-kun, I'll serve you some.
Thanks.
Here.
Ganmodoki tofu
Xiao Long Bao
Daikon raddish
These choices are extremely scalding hot!! [TN note: All these food have ingredients which absorb the soup, so it makes them super hot when eating fresh.]
Comic 1
Compatibility 0
Eh
Is this takoyaki?
[note: ball of flour batter and diced or minced octopus]
Takoyaki fits surprisingly well with hotpots.
You're right.
This is good.
Some things may look like a mismatch at first glance,
But they turn out surprisingly well.
Like Orcs and female knights.
It's so hot she can't speak ->
Comic 2
Perfect timing
Wow, winter hotpots really are the best.
It's hot...
>>>I'll take this coat off.
I'l take my pullover off.
After all, you can see lighter clothes during winter.
I don't have such imprudent thoughts.
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What the hell is that in the bottom left corner of the page?
Jonathan Gray
You take that back, Takahama is a repressed degenerate, but Kaede is a good girl.
Blake Garcia
Oh I like this idea of playing up her chuuniness let me amend my script.
>"there are unseeable figures among us."
>>>I actually
Actually
>Can "see people" (small) So yeah.
There is an unseen figure amongst us.
>>>Sorry, I actually just made a mistake.
Sorry, actually I just made a mistake.