Post lyrics/poems you've written, and other anons post their attempted cover of that song. The more people that contribute for recording stuff the better these go.
Post lyrics/poems you've written, and other anons post their attempted cover of that song...
is cringe accepted?
Not only is it accepted its expected
Why can't I get a moment of peace?
Why can't I get a moment of peace?
There's so much injustice going on in our world
So I can't get a moment of peace.
that could be an 80's hardcore punk chorus
Sorry that took so long, was having some technical difficulties.
any other takers? I know these threads take some time to get going usually
I changed my mind I'd sing it like this if
>I could actually sing
>could play a guitar to make the backing track lol
hang around user ill see what I can do
Thanks for the moment of peace.
I think this is what you were going for, I think...
The r9k band has begun. If someone feeds me loads of drugs I can be the pete doherty fuckup frontman
Normally I don't post my own lyrics in these threads, but this is going really slow:
Going down to fishermans bay
If you want me to I will stay
waiting upon your loving sign
that I am yours and you are mine
But I'm scared again
of being without
You by my said
To cover all this doubt
When you are near my body is warm
For your touch I always yearn
Waiting upon that loving sign
that I am yours and that you are mine
But I'm scared again
of being without
You by my said
To cover all this doubt
And wherever you be
I will travel by land, I will travel by sea
Cause I'm searching for you
There is nothing that I would rather do
Than by looking for you
But I'm scared again
of being without
You by my said
To cover all this doubt
But I'm scared again
of being without
You by my said
To cover all my doubt
Here you go
Sweating in my bed with the fan on three
If it were any quieter I would bleed through the sheets
I wish I could smoke but it would trip the alarm
Im a plastic explosive I detonate when its warm
No such thing as drama, its just conflict dragged out
Trial by combat, thats what Im about
Take all your problems, put them in a box
Never be honest, or youre totally fucked
lol get fucked cunt, your song has been ruined by bass guitar
also, do you have the capo on the first or sixth fret, or did I just play in an entirely different key?
vocaroo.com
Timing issues with the vocals but this is what I got
Capo on the fourth fret with these chords relative to the capo
Bm A E
It sounds good, I think we are just a little out of tune of each other.
Oh fuck, lol, I was hitting the fifth of each chord instead of the root note
Whatever, close enough for my ears anyways
BUMPEROONI ORGINIALLY
thanks alot man, really like it. Have you got a bandcamp?
this world is fucked up
niggers telling me whats up
cosmic forces messaging me non-stop
and hookers seducing us while done up
seems like the best thing to do is to shut-up
Would love your opinions on this song I released recently, frens
youtu.be
vocaroo keeps giving me errors when i try to upload files
clyp.it
Suspiciously professional for someone on Zig Forums. Not for me but I think my dad would love this song.
I appreciate it! It took months of autistically tweaking everything
very quickly this growing sense of despair makes me feel as if im trying to speak in a vacuum. i open my mouth but there is no internal drive to make these words come into reality. i ache for sunlight. the cross i carry on my neck drives me insane. my mind repels it like a magnet. i have been sitting on this beach for so long, building sandcastles and waiting for the waves to make them undone. leaving this place would be like diving in the waters, the cold, terrible waters, where there is no sunlight for me to ache for. i threw my cross in the ocean, but the waves aways bring it back. and i throw it again, and build another sandcastle, this post.
from delusion to delusion, the half-awake, dizzy consciousness of my own failures makes me question everything i know once again. but at this point how could i embrace yet another lie, another delusion?
>i have found the truth. all i need is a little sunlight.
you lot can actually improvise multiple chords on a guitar while im only just a beginner at playing acoustic, FUCK
AAAAAH, AAAAAAAAAAAAAHH, I'M GONNA BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMPP
bro, i love the alternative/punk sound you added, good job, what were the chords?
I went down to the paki shop
To buy a loaf of bread
I put it on the counter
This is what he said
Hip hop paki shop two ninety nine
Don't let the paki shop
Rip you off next time
Went down to the cafe
to confess to all my sins
but you just said
please sir, you're bothering the other customers
so i went back to the place
where the boy became a man
but she just said
please, sir, you're scaring all the children
I'm sorry but i'll have to ask you to leave
and if you don't i'll be forced to call the police
what are you doing in my house?
fuck you then, i might as well go home