Reading your essay, I like the questions you presented to the reader. Also, you might want to look into the different cultures in America how they perceive the nuclear family model. Questions are good, but I think they are better as inconclusive statements. Let the reader marinate on that statement. I think that is due to how I write any kind of essay; I give the claim, then the evidence, then tie it back to my main argument, I do not use rhetorical questions because that is the reader's job.
You might want to re-read your essay to make sure the tone is not too harsh, yet not too frail. I do not write the best papers, but I am consistent with the quality I put out. Also, re-read your essay out loud to get a feeling for it. Good Luck
Elijah Carter
This thread reminds of something interesting I saw in a psych textbook.
English but Majoring in Bookeeping I like to teach in my essays seeing on how most of them are critiques I know it's a bit harsh, I write essays better if I'm angry with the Arguments then change them later.
I will however try to input other cultures views.
Justin Hall
The media has not pushed the "Model Family" for decades, they have, in fact, done everything possible to attack and destroy it.
Remember that Time article about African family planning? It was something like: "Why have 4 when you could have 7" Link to that and then claim that dictating what time of family a proud and wonderful Negro may have or seek is racist and truly Euro-centric. Boy, they really fucked themselves over with this one. Honestly, user, if I were writing this essay I would attack this point alone and then go on to point out that, once you have established that it is racist to call the Nuclear Family "Euro-Centric", the entire argument falls apart.
The idea that something else exists does no disprove that something else does not exist. This is the single most retarded thing I have read for months, and I lurk on /v/.
If you want some shiny graphs and statistics to make your professor all horny I suggest you support this by finding those graphs that compare long-term relations with promiscuous behavior. There are also the FBI statistics on how children with only one parent, especially a mother, are more likely to be sociopaths and criminals.
Disregards sources and attack rhetoric as being racist towards "peoples of color" If you can out-Tu8mblr the Tumblrina, you win every-time. Only use the "correct sources" as evidence of your own points.
Henry Butler
Because you are just as bad if not worse than niggers. You don't have families. I live in California I see you fuckers everyday. There are many single mother spics going out getting fucked by a different spic while 40 year old "Abuelita" is taking care of the spiclets running around the barrio. Of course sometimes Abuelita goes out to get hammered with Abuelito because they are only 40 so still "young." It's fine, 14 year old daughter just had her Quince. She is a woman now so she can handle 5 fucking spiclets running around. Oh wait no she's a teenager she doesn't want to do that so she goes out too to get knocked up which is fine. She had a Quince so she's a woman now who can make babies. Good thing the state is always there to send a check in the mail.
Blake King
They weren't counting 12 family households in the census.
Jose Bailey
To give context to the essay: It is mainly focused on 1950s views on Families and that somehow the media pushed a lie because "post war panic" called for the media to push the "lie" My next paragraphs will actually prove that media and culture effect each other and the Media showed shows like Leave it to Beaver as examples of the average families.
I am pointing out that it's racist to call it "Euro Centric" in the paragraph I am currently writing.
I know, I already disproved that point
Thanks, That's a good Idea
That's also a good idea
Evan Bailey
English, really? Holy shit, you have it bad. The English class I am currently taking, we read a short essay from David Hume and wrote an argumentative essay, read a short story by Edgar Allan Poe and wrote a literary analysis, and now we are debating about the media being punished for publishing false facts/news. The other topics seem to intrigue me more, because how it is basically challenging the dogma that academia, government, and media holds today. This seems more like a Sociology course than a English course.
Yeah, the writer's tone is integral to writing a good essay. You do not want to be explicit with your emotions, rather try to find a way to connect it with facts while working within the source. Subvert the reader by looking within the source and see what is lacking in it, which you do an okay job at.
Also, think outside the norm. It is difficult, unless you practice it constantly. However, once it becomes a habit, you will gain self-respect and respect for the group that is silent in your class, while making your adversaries look like a bunch of immature and irresponsible individuals. Remember the first battle is in the classroom. I always love getting into battles, it is how I improve myself as a scholar and individual.
Brayden Moore
Yeah my teacher is a Germanic+Slav+Jew Mutt that obviously hit the wall HARD. She just turns the Class into semi sociology as she babbles on jumping from topic to topic.
Austin Kelly
I would say that is a terrible English professor. In fact, I would go administration to complain about the material given to me. The best ones are the types that are open to anything and rewards it more than those that just repeat talking points that appease to their perspective, reminds me of my Junior and Senior year English teacher and my current English professor. Then again, you got a literal kike roastie teaching the class, so what can you do about that?
